Thursday, January 27, 2011

Discussion Essay

Fast Food restaurants are places where you can go and have lunch, dinner and even breakfast in a quick and low-cost way. There are a lot of different restaurants where you can go all arround the world,:MacDonald's, KFC, Burger King... As everything, they all have some advantages and some disadvantages.

On the one hand, food in those restaurants is very cheap and tasty. Furthermore, you can eat in a few minutes and you can even take away food food away. This may help you in more than one situation.

On the other hand, food use to be is usually very low-quality and it creates litter. It is medically tested that it can make you become overweight creating eating disorders and obesity.
In conclusion, Fast food restaurants is are not the place where you should go every day because, as I said before, it can cause you eating disorders,. nevertheless, it's it is not a bad place to go when you are in a hurry or when you want to eat for a few euros.

Be careful with spelling
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Wednesday, January 26, 2011

Essay discusion

A discussion essay-Fast food

Many people bring the convenience of fast food, but also cause inconvenience, such as obesity, malnutrition, etc. 1 sentence paragraph

On one hand, many people believe that the convenience of fast food is all accepted, very popular with office workers welcome, especially now and especially the children began to like.

On the other hand, bringing a variety of fast food caused by malnutrition, disease is also very much, also caused most of the people, particularly people who often eat fast food, a variety of obesity.

In conclusion, I think that is necessary for the existence of fast food, fast food is totally on the one hand can rest assured that the phenomenon of food poisoning, but the medical point of view is completely unnecessary, so I think that fast food should continue to operate
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FAST FOOD

Fast food is a convenient way to eat, but sometimes the convenient things are not the most advisable. Like all the things, the fast food has his its advantages and his disadvantages.


On the one hand, fast food is cheap. You don't need to pay a lot of money for a hamburger. Furthermore, fast food are is convenient because, how as the name very well says, is fast. Besides, fast food is tasty.


On the other hand, fast food contains a lot of calories and if you don't practice sports, it can make you become overweight. Another problem is that fast food has a very bad quality, the companies are looking more for tasty products, than healthy products.


In conclusion, I think that fast food is ok very informal for a specific moment, but not for eating it all the time. If you are looking for healthy food, fast food is not the food that you are looking for.

Avoid contractions. Repeated expressions (looking for, fast food, ...)
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A discussion essay: Fast food

Fast food

Fast food is a new food that has come from North America. It's a new way of eating, that a lot of people love, but there are people too final position that says that fast food is very bad. Fast food has some advantages, and some disadvantages.

On the one hand, fast food has a lot of disadvantages. It's very tasty and very cheap that allows a lot of people without money to eat. In addition, when you need to eat fast because you don't have time, you can go to a fast food restaurant too.

On the other hand, fast food has a lot of disadvantages,: because it causes overweight if you eat too much. Fast food creates a lot of litter, and it has very bad quality.

In conclusion, I think that to a fast food restaurant, you can go once or twice a week, but you can't go every day. Fast food is ok very informal, but with moderation.

Excess of "fast food". Avoid contractions.
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A discussion essay: The internet

The internet is used every day by millions of people all over the world, but it has many advantages and disadvantages. 1 sentence paragraph

On the one hand, the internet is a useful invention. For example, if you have a school Project, you can find out information very quickly on in the Internet. You can look at reference books in the library too, but that takes a long time. The Internet is also usesd by many people to keep up with things such as the latest news, buy and sell things, play games, watch films and listen to music.

On the other hand, there are disadvantages to the internet. For example, using computers for long periods is thought to be bad for your health, and sometimes it is difficult to control what children see on the internet.
This means that they might come across information which is not suitable for them. In addition, people might give up going to libraries or buying reference books.

In conclusion, the internet is very useful and people keep on using it. It is like having access to the world’s library. However, if it is not used sensibly, it can become a problem. You should always set a time limit for yourself.

Andrea Aleixandre

Very good!! be consistent: if you write Internet with capital letter, do it everywhere
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Monday, January 24, 2011

A discussion essay.

Fast food.





Fast food becamed on the 1951 in America. It has changed the live of a lot of people arround the world. However, there are some advantatges and some disadvantatges.



On the one hand,fast food is cheap, it likes to a lot of children , it is fast to prepare and is not difficult to get. 1 sentence paragraph




On the other hand, fast food crates a lot of obbesity arround the world, teenagers use to usually eat a lot of fast food,and it contais a lot of calories. The problem is that they don't want to eat other food that is not fast food. Aswell, final position and "as well" fast food contaminates a lot because of the gigant fabriques.



In conclusion, fast food has been a way to eat for some poor people, and an illness for some others. 1 sentence paragraph

Carla Brito
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